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Minnie Cadambi's avatar

I love that this poem is expressing such a desperate need to prove one’s self. The intensity of feelings expressed are surprising only to an adult, but if we could take a leaf from this poets work and time travel, we would witness that indeed only the young can feel and express with such abandon. And yet, as if a window into survival instinct of this poet, he ask’s for an additional life, just so he can face the precipice, but also enjoy the fruits of the bravery

Sierra's avatar

Thank you so much for sharing your inner light with the world! I am so glad to have met you and to have the opportunity to read your poetry! This poem about your dance and conversation with life makes me very glad that you have discovered David Whyte, another kindred spirit for you :-)

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